MFU stories

[kelliem]

I just figured I should post this here, too, since some folks aren't on muncle. I've uploaded two stories for a friend of mine with very limited internet access. Both NC-17 NS/IK. You can find them at:

http://www.chromeandgunmetal.com/chrome/archive/0/leather.html
and
http://www.chromeandgunmetal.com/chrome/archive/0/paperwork.html

I happen to think they both kick serious butt. ;)

Comments

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

"Leather" is just. . .guh. Hot and actually quite moving. Please pass my congratulations on to your friend.

And dammit, now my sex scenes feel rather pallid in comparison.

[kelliem.livejournal.com]

*makes jealous face* I know just what you mean.

Leather

[tgabrielle.livejournal.com]

So mysterious.

First of all, Shay, I love the steering wheel in Illya's uncertain hands. I think we chose the same eyeballs--darting where?

Second, I loved "Leather" (couldn't find the other story) but who is behind it? There is so much I could comment upon but not if the author won't see it. Enough, for now, to say I found it poignant and on target. The characterizations were so close to how I see them, so close I not only wished I had written it (or could write it) but I also thought I would never bother writing if I could read such. I'd rather read than write. Thanks for posting it.

Re: Leather

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

I think you nailed IK in your icon, my dear!

[kelliem.livejournal.com]

He'll be able to see the comments that are left at the archive, but replying is another matter. I will also let him know if people leave comments with me.

Your Illya

[tgabrielle.livejournal.com]

Um, why does your pix of Illya have a mullet, a big nose and a swarthy complexion. I think you need to watch some episodes, girl!

Again, thanks for posting the two stories--I really enjoyed them.

Re: Your Illya

[kelliem.livejournal.com]

I defy you not to call David's nose big. :) The mullet is because I couldn't find one that sticks out like the back of his. And he's not always pasty. I can think of several eps where he was nicely tanned.

Leather and Paperwork

[dinahmt.livejournal.com]

Thank you for posting these - what a treat! They were beautifully written. I loved the use of smell, particularly in 'Leather'. I personally think this is a very underrated sense considering it is so evocative. Please pass on my congratulations and ask your friend to give us more!

Re: Leather and Paperwork

[kelliem.livejournal.com]

I was very happy to post them-- I thought they deserved a wider audience than me. :)